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Submitted: November 13, 2007
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See his design is shitty because I spent only like 45 minutes coloring him? So his design sucks too ftw.
Oh yeah so I designed him on paper instead of working on math so I'ma get a zero and an academic detention tomorrow but I hate my math teacher so I don't care.
HERE'S KITE.
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:heart: Kite.

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haha, he looks awesome!
Um, actually, I don't think the design looks all that bad. >: Its simple and easy to remember, it isn't needlessly cluttered and the colors are easy on the eyes.

I would suggest getting some references of canines though, your anatomy is really off in places. The muzzle looks too long, as are the legs/tail when compared to the size of his body. Personally, I'd shorten them a bit.

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I'm telling you! People who eat pickles are nice people!
I know, the sketch for this was months old but I was trying to give him some long legs. The neck's too long too, same with the muzzle. And he's supposed to have a big tail. ^^;

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I kick a hole in the speaker.
Ah, I see. <:

Still, I'd get some photos to use for reference. Couldn't hurt, right?

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I'm telling you! People who eat pickles are nice people!
Yep, of course! I'll do that next time. :D

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Advanced Critique...
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IT'S FANTASTIC I SAY.
EXTROIDINARY.
SIMPLY MARVELOUS.


D: Advanced enough?
But those were compliments not crits Cindy x3
Thank you thoughhh :heart:

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I kick a hole in the speaker.
Dah, I suck at critique! D:

Uhm................the legs seem a little long to me...and the stripes on his head could maybe use a touch more definition. I think. ^^;

I always suck so hard at critisisim. DX

But still, I reaqlly like this! :D

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